“Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places”

Laws are formed to administer all the beings on earth either the human beings or non-human beings. The laws are, now a days, the integral part of one's life and they strictly adhere with one. Yes, there has been a long discussion a long time back that either we should have amendable laws or strict enough to have no margin at all. It depends upon the scenario at that instance. However, some people may misinterpret the special circumstances and utilize them as taken for granted.

All the formed laws should be firmly rigid and strict enough in implementation to have any loose hole. There should be no margin at all for anyone either the law is associated with one's personal life or one's professional life. Of course there are some contingencies margins provided by the law enforcement authorities. But these gaps or margins should not be flexible enough so that one my utilize them beyond the intent of that law.

For instance, when I moved from my country to UAE, I found a lot of new laws. Most of those strict laws were related to traffic and they were extremely strict. In initial days, I found so much difficulty as I used to use car for most of the time. But with the passage of time, I became used to those laws and they were inherited into my nature and attitude. I was not allowed to use any margin for emergency. And of course, in parallel, they have made strict laws in case of violation but we have to compromise over that.

Let's take another example. In Bahrain, there was an issue raised in the passports of Indian and Pakistani citizens. The Bahraini government made a very strict law ensuring no entrance in Bahrain from sea port for the Asian nationalities. And there was no margin for relaxation whatever were the circumstances or whatever were the emergencies. This worked for them and now, Bahrain is the most valuable and believable country in passport section. Here you see, this is the advantage of making the laws strict and enforcing the forced implementation irrespective of the conditions.

But this is not the case in all circumstances. For sure there are some conditions, were we may allow the relaxation of laws associated with some boundaries. For example, if we have to travels from Saudi Arabia to any other country in the world, all the expats need to have exit visa from KSA government. In emergency cases (death of relative, delivery of baby or any disastrous condition), we have the option to apply for specific visa by taking special approval from higher authorities. So in that case, the relaxation margin is provided for the well being of the human beings.

So in conclusion, all the laws should be firmly fixed and should not have any margin for flexibility. This will help true implementation of laws and will serve the purpose of penetrating the exact required essence of those laws.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ings or non-human beings. The laws are, now a days, the integral part of ones life and the...
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... or non-human beings. The laws are, now a days, the integral part of ones life and the...
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s are, now a days, the integral part of ones life and they strictly adhere with one....
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...but we have to compromise over that. Lets take another example. In Bahrain, there...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74343434343 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69205544788 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.0 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0636126334 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6785714286 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150323511857 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480227407805 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529443635712 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962624662619 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612673040134 0.0667264976115 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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