Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Laws and rules are extremely important in our live to control the people’s tempramnets and to achieve the peace between them. The prompt says that laws and rules should be flexible not rigid and take into account the conditions around that laws before applying. I strongly agree with the prompt, for many reasons.
First, not all the crimes happen for the same intencives and in the same ways. As people not act the same even if they put in the same situation. Fo example, if you are investigator and have two persons accused of a murder crim, it is so important to figure out what is behind each crime and what is the reason for commiting. As one of those murders could comit his crime as a self-defense, and the other for immuniation. Therefore, the situation here is completely different. Undoubtedly, the judgement will be different. If the law doesn’t have a room to consider each case separately, this will be unfair and defenitly will not be able to achieve the maim purpose of peace and jutice.
Not only the lwas and rules which deal with crimes should be flexible, but also the rules which control the society growth and development. For instance,China’s law of the one child, this law has been enacted several years ago to limit the population growth; however, it caused several social’s problem at the family level. If the country doesn’t retreat to correct this law, this will exacerpate the problem. However, China nowadays tries to correct this law according to the current situation’s need. Here again the flexibilty is crucial for the nation’s integrities.
Further, another example illusterare to what extent the flexibitly is significant. In Suadi Arabia, they didn’t allow women to drive and the law was prohibiting it. As time passed, the country’s responsibles discovered that the women became part and parcel from the economic progress. Most of women became workers and to commute their works, they cannot go with their cars by themselves, but with their drivers. The drivers’ wages were so high and act as a burden in the women’s income budget. As corollary, they prefered to quite their works and stay at home because the work doesn’t cover their purposes. If the country didn’t amend the laws, the country’s economic would affected, therefore, recently, the law of preventing the girls and women from driving has been corrected upon the current condition and the country’s needs.
In conclusion, Law and rules are created to make our lives easier and more controrable, not to make it harder, and to make the live in peace achivable. Thus, to achieve all above goals, laws should me adaptive to the situations and the currect needs whether at the individual level as mentioned in paragraph one or at the countries level as mentioned in paragraph two and three.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...figure out what is behind each crime and what is the reason for commiting. As one...
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Line 2, column 652, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d defenitly will not be able to achieve the maim purpose of peace and jutice. Not only ...
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Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efenitly will not be able to achieve the maim purpose of peace and jutice. Not o...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , China
...ety growth and development. For instance,China’s law of the one child, this law has be...
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Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the women') or simply say ''Most women''.
Suggestion: Most of the women; Most women
... and parcel from the economic progress. Most of women became workers and to commute their wor...
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Line 4, column 674, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
... the laws, the country’s economic would affected, therefore, recently, the law of preven...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97881355932 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74909559179 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3567992902 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188973793406 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047802866788 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757386093215 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107046469058 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658430183427 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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