Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Laws are the basic principles of our life, so the behavior of people should not go beyond a certain line confined by the laws. Laws are a strong tool to maintain peace and harmony in our society. However, each and every situation can be different. So, from my point of view, I am more aligned with the position that the laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times and places, due to the following two reasons. However, I do concede that there should be some laws in our society that should be rigid so as to maintain law and order in the society.
First of all, in our society we have created various laws, so as to maintain order. Violation of that laws is considered crime and appropriate punishment is given by the judiciary system. But, the circumstance in which the law was broken should also be taken into account. For example, in most western countries, to break a red traffic signal is awarded with a fine, but if someone beaks the signal in order to take his loved one to a Hospital for an emergency is it fair to him the speeding ticket? I think not.
Secondly, there are some laws that have become obsolete with the passage of time and according to me there should be system with which we can modify the archaic law. For example, in ancient times only the oldest son of a person was eligible to inherit his father's property also the daughters' did not have any right to her father's money or property. But with the passage of time that law has been changed and in out modern world each and every child of a person is eligible to inherit his property.
However, if all the laws are flexible then it would do more harm than good to our society as whole. I think that there should be some laws that are rigid. For example, if someone is accused of rape than there should be strict law about it in our world as by not strictly punishing the accused, the society is sending a message that our laws are weak and they can not affectively punish the guilty and there might be some other people who might be tempted to do the same by seeing this.
Thus in conclusion, we can say that there should be balance between the two aspects. There should be some firm and rigid laws for every crime that can guide the judges and the government to maintain peace in the society. However, at the same time there should be some flexibility when it comes to applying the laws in different circumstances. There should be some scope to modify the existing laws, and also the laws that have become obsolete in the today's technological age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aws in our society that should be rigid so as to maintain law and order in the society. ...
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...r society we have created various laws, so as to maintain order. Violation of that laws ...
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...ime and according to me there should be system with which we can modify the archaic la...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...mpted to do the same by seeing this. Thus in conclusion, we can say that there sh...
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Message: Did you mean 'balanced'?
Suggestion: balanced
...lusion, we can say that there should be balance between the two aspects. There should b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47021276596 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35362333 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444680851064 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1707127331 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.05 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427329970606 0.243740707755 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149129071688 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118095985516 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25792947246 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968272571498 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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