Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Leaders are those people who pave the way for people and help in guiding people towards the betterment of the society and the people. The issue that whether or not leaders are created by demands that are placed on them is a contentious one. While both sides has its strengths and weaknesses, I believe that when there is a cause or social evil, there are more possibilities for a leader to rise from the public/people.
Firstly, let us take India, during its pre-independence era, around 1910s people started questioning the authorities and started demanding for independence. This led to the rise of many notable leaders who then ceased the opportunity and guided the people of India towards independence. One among the myriad freedom fighters and leaders was Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi. Gandhi noticed that his fellow contemporaries / freedom fighters used violence to protest against the British rule. Gandhi was an ardent believer of Non-Violence and he preached non-violence. This was one of the main reason why India got its Independence from British in 1947.
Additionally, when people are unanimously fighting for a cause (be it against the government officials or against a certain law), by nature(psychologically) people want someone to be a representative. This implies that when some event occurs which instigates people, they expect a leader to steer them in the right direction.
Conversely people might argue that leaders are not formed only when a situation demands it. While this may be true in some cases like religious leaders, but there has been abundant cases in the past where leaders are formed when the situation demanded it. For example, Martin Luther King Jr. He played a major role in getting rid of oppression of African-American people in the United States of America. Another example is Malala Yousafzai, she is a Pakistani Activist and a Nobel Price laureate who stands for the rights of women education in Pakistan.
In conclusion, leaders are often created by the demands placed on them. Even though the leader might feel differently from the things expected out of him, the leader must serve the need or problems of the people else he/she might be supplanted with the new leader who is able to cater to their demands.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... society and the people. The issue that whether or not leaders are created by demands that are...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Conversely,
...to steer them in the right direction. Conversely people might argue that leaders are not...
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Line 4, column 476, Rule ID: PRICE_PRIZE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'Nobel Prize' (reward)?
Suggestion: Nobel Prize
...fzai, she is a Pakistani Activist and a Nobel Price laureate who stands for the rights of w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06738544474 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94374354928 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6254108358 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.588235294 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304456425063 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128768608388 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.210271472944 0.0758088955206 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191253003494 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132920471459 0.0667264976115 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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