Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Nowadays, in every fields, where there are groups of people, there are leaders to make sure they are in the right way. Undoubtedly, we all know the significance of leaders, however, people will debate on how leaders are created. Some people hold the view that leaders are formed because other persons need them. Others assert that it is because of their own wills that enable them to become leaders. As for me, I am neutral about these two opinions, and I think it depends on different situations. The reasons are as follows.
On the one hand, for every leaders, they need support and loyalty from other people in a group, organization, company or country. Moreover, because there are people who need a leader, here comes a leader. An old saying goes "no country could run well without a leader". The prior demand for every group is to unite and fight for the same goal instead of doing many useless things. For another, some groups might need a leader because of their urgent demands. Take black people as an example, until now, we cannot say that there is no discrimination towards black people. In last centuries, their situation were so bad, but they cannot fight for their freedom or equal rights without leaders. So here come Martin L. King and Nelson Mandala.
However, on the other hand, sometimes, it is because of their own wills that create leaders. That is to say, some leaders might not fulfill their groups' dream, but fulfill their own dream. For example, during the Second World War, a well-known leader from Germany called Hitler. He became a leader to satisfy his own demands, which let many innocent people die and many families be taken apart. Furthermore, there is evidence that many demands are wrong so leaders should have their own mind. Sometimes, leaders are created by their leaders, so they might be forced to do something they don't like. For example, in China, in some cities, government officers bribe many leaders from police offices, so they would get away from punishments although they are doing wrong things. At this case, leaders must have their will and choose the right way instead of following the demand.
Whether a leader is created by demands or not depends on different situations. For small groups, in most cases, leaders are created by demands. For developed countries, since their citizens have already lived in a fulfilling life, leaders will find it hard to know what demands are placed on them. Therefore, they might need their own will to make their countries great. For developing countries, such as some countries in Africa, many citizens are starving so leaders are created. They need to spare no efforts to solve this situation.
All in all, it is cursory to draw a conclusion that external demands create leaders. Without internal demands, leaders might not find enough motivation to lead a whole group. However, undoubtedly, leaders should deal with external demands unless they want to step down and live with regret in the rest of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as for', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as', 'in most cases', 'on the other hand', 'that is to say']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216806722689 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.157983193277 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0873949579832 0.0880659088768 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0453781512605 0.0497285424764 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0638655462185 0.0444667217837 144% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.126050420168 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0252100840336 0.0406280797675 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39809613066 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218487394958 0.030933414821 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0739495798319 0.0997080785238 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0268907563025 0.0249443105267 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100840336134 0.0148568991511 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3010.0 2732.02544248 110% => OK
No of words: 510.0 452.878318584 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90196078431 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358823529412 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260784313725 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137254901961 0.200843997647 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0666666666667 0.132149295362 50% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39809613066 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 219.290929204 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.1947347379 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6194690265 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4516129032 23.380412469 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7871393937 59.4972553346 50% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0967741935 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4516129032 23.380412469 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.516129032258 0.674092028746 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 42.5300442758 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.37735849057 1.64882698954 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399277009612 0.391690518653 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0881228369124 0.123202303941 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0701436346411 0.077325440228 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.419073177824 0.547984918172 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115585592699 0.149214159877 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12475860993 0.161403998019 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101299453306 0.0892212321368 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33077974433 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0550496788451 0.0692045440612 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265274010483 0.275328986314 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120993207652 0.0653680567796 185% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.30420353982 245% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 13.0 3.66592920354 355% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.5995575221 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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