Once upon a time in the past people had selected leaders based upon their ability to fulfill the demands that are helpful to the people. But when we see in this modern era Leaders are created by own themselves, there are no demands which make calculate their ability. In this aspect I disagree about the author's notion on the Leaders are created by the demands.
When we look into the example when we categorize politicians as leaders, politicians play a vital role in the whole country. During at the time of elections, they actually play spurious politics, for the winning of elections they give money and alcohol to voters and ask them to vote for their winning. and also only during at the time of elections they are present among people. They can make whatever people want and fulfill their small problems. But, finally after winning elections they never again visit to the places where they have been get a majority of votes. So, actually politicians created on their own, they doesn't have any demands, even they have demands they never fulfill. actually without fulfill demands that are placed on them they become leaders, without any demands they become leaders.
Even not only politicians, leaders like union of the employees also following the same rule. During at the time of elections they behave gratitude among voters, finally after winning they forget fulfill all their demands. Even sometimes without demands leaders are created and construct their own leadership. For example, the popular leader and father of nation Gandhi, He is the person who makes the country in the single path that is non-violence and peacefulness. He fought for the nation to get independence by gathering all the citizens and giving rigorous speeches on independence. In this example Gandhi, had never fulfill the demands of the people, he just fought for the country to get independence. Even the demands are not created him as leader, his own idea on the independence and dominance among foreigners, he fought for the country. so, finally demands are not solely responsible to create the leader.
Leader should create based on varied reasons, some are created due to dominance by others and some are created due to inborn leadership qualities etc.., So, finally in the conclusion leaders are not made they are by born is the phrase which depicts this idea. the great leadership makes the person great leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, look, so, even so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99004975124 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47456805168 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44776119403 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4387218538 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128834778721 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491728434222 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405086132572 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935702989978 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268540698348 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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