Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Leader has always changed the path of the crowd to guide them to his or her appropriate desire path. But what make them leader while enourmous other people just follow the leader. Some people believe leaders have innate ability that other do not, while others claim all of the people could be a leader just they should leard how to lead people and leading is a skill not a gift. I strongly agree with the latter statement and I will explain my reasons.
First of all, I believe you could rarely find abilities that are innate, and I think most of abilities learnable by hard working and persistence, likewise leading skill. There are a lot of courses, books and videos in youtube that learn people how you can speech and how you can influence on others. In addition, for some who are interested, there are lots of universities and programs that learn politics to student. These are some sources that could improve leading skills for interested people. For example, Bill Clinton, former United States' persident, intended in politic program and for long term was senator which improved his skills for leading people. Finally, after ahieveing appropriate knowledge and skill, he nominated for persident election and became success. I believe his success is not because of innate gift, in converse, it is due to hard working and persistence in his path.
Moreover, apart from different courses and programs, the environment could be an important parameter in presenting a leader. In some society with unfair situation some may think to free the society so they strive in this path. For example, Mahatma Gandhi and Nelson Mandella could be a good example of leaders who try to free their people. due to situation and the society environment, they try to lead their people while if their country were free, they may not become a leader.
On the other hand, some people maintain that leading people is an innate gift and some people are leader when they born. They examplify some teenagers or kids that are leader of his or her fellow without any education and learning. Although their ideaa look cogent at the first glance, I reckon they did not consider their family. Some family environment provide some situation that kids behave like a leader.
In conclusion, although some may think leading is an gifted skill, I believe leading skills could be learnable by courses, programs, and videos. I can name Bill Clinton, Gandhi, and Mandella as some leaders who have special education and were in special environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...y that other do not, while others claim all of the people could be a leader just they shou...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the abilities') or simply say ''most abilities''.
Suggestion: most of the abilities; most abilities
... abilities that are innate, and I think most of abilities learnable by hard working and persisten...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
... books and videos in youtube that learn people how you can speech and how you can infl...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...f leaders who try to free their people. due to situation and the society environmen...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ion, although some may think leading is an gifted skill, I believe leading skills ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, i reckon, i think, in addition, in conclusion, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91529411765 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.447300893 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9459333944 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4761904762 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2380952381 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61904761905 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106733821044 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371780518219 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340230951904 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576911187315 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398918327945 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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