Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like while others say that they should think more realistically about their future Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, teenagers need to decide what kind of jobs is suitable for them. An issue to be evaluated is whether the benefits of selecting a vocation by their interest freely worth the cost. Some individuals describe to the view that preferences for career selection is vital, whereas others believe they require to consider job’s reality for the future. There are some strong reasons for both sides, which will be explained followed by my own take.
Some people assume that choosing a job that you like is crucial for juvenile. They ponder that if you like your career, you will spend more time in order to be prosperous. I definitely believe that Practice makes perfect. So hardly can anyone be successful in his job without enough effort. The more you are motivated, the more you do not waste your time and also, you focus in your job which leads to a appropriate result. For instance, I heard from my father one time that he told me if he had returned to the past to change something, he would have altered his job and have chosen one that he really liked.
On the other hand, some individuals claim that youth must be actual in job selection. They subscribe to the view that some jobs are well paid and you have a easier path to pursue for being thriving. However, it is possible that after a while people feel blue and disappointed in their position and get depressed. In my opinion, money oriented should not be regarded as the first people’ option. Moreover, it is indispensable to take into account the happiness in the life. Without satisfaction and ecstasy, life would be a disaster.
In conclusion, although some people think job prospect is pivotal for young’s career, but I personally feel that teenagers must be free to pick the jobs that they have keen on them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70287539936 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52760282509 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0425379352 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5882352941 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258585818393 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793132262546 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633097885018 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163877234268 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382604623213 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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