Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Some may argue that leaders are produced by the desires of the other people and the present situation. A discussion of this topic is essential since it relates to what really affects leaders. In my stance, I do not agree that leaders solely created by others' hope but also by themselves for the following reasons.
First of all, leaders have their own choices. They could be a follower and be guided by other leaders, even they do not like other leaders. Therefore, they choose to be the leaders by their own desires. In contrast, if they do not want to be a leader, no matter how much others want, it has no chance to make a reluctant person to be a good leader and no people tend to advocate a bad or not good leader. Therefore, one's own desire has taken both a large part and the most important role in being a leader.
Moreover, there are high and exacting requirements on abilities for being a president, leader, and guide. People would value a person's abilities to make sure that the person is suitable to be a leader or not at first. No matter how many hopes placed on them, if they do not have sufficient abilities to conquer the job, they would not succeed to achieve the highest position. Thus, all the people who successfully become leaders definitely have enough abilities because they have already settled the internal dissents and win their group's supports, which shows they have the adequate abilities.
Admittedly, demands from others would also affect the result of being a leader or not. Nevertheless, if one does not demonstrate any qualities which tend to be a great leader, other people would not ask the person to be the leader. In the other hand, people would tend to elect or demand a person who has revealed the suitable qualities to be an intelligent guide. To illustrate, if someone has no intention to be a guide and no abilities to be a smart and efficient leader, no people would ask the person to be their president. Hence, the own desire and abilities are the most important factors of being a leader.
To sum up, there are many requirements, except publics or other people's hope, needed to be conquered as a leader. Not only one's own determination but also abilities play the very essential roles of being a leader.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
here 'demands' doesn't only mean 'wishes, or hope...' from other people, it may mean a right time, or a right place/location/situation but no any wished placed by others..
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 400 350
No. of Characters: 1806 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.472 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.515 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.477 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.049 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.895 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.565 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
Some may argue that leaders are produced by the desire...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... not want to be a leader, no matter how much others want, it has no chance to make a...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in contrast', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204954954955 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.175675675676 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0900900900901 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0675675675676 0.0497285424764 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0405405405405 0.0444667217837 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0743243243243 0.12292977631 60% => OK
Participles: 0.0337837837838 0.0406280797675 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57824431542 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.045045045045 0.030933414821 146% => OK
Particles: 0.00225225225225 0.0016655270985 135% => OK
Determiners: 0.119369369369 0.0997080785238 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018018018018 0.0249443105267 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0157657657658 0.0148568991511 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2256.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 400.0 452.878318584 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3275 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2275 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1425 0.200843997647 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1025 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57824431542 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 219.290929204 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4625 0.48968727796 94% => OK
Word variations: 49.4885886512 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0526315789 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6457416371 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.736842105 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.674092028746 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 43.8026315789 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.10317460317 1.64882698954 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302138799412 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131559805507 0.123202303941 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0999401479678 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.535108955819 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141644429837 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129481464084 0.161403998019 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673049416862 0.0892212321368 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365890530251 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0822628276889 0.0692045440612 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207152193794 0.275328986314 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747067048906 0.0653680567796 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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