Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position,

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Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Being a leader by requirement or responsibilities imposed on an individual works in some situation where team is helpful and good results are obtained.
To be a leader is to have a good attitude towards coworkers and sub ordinates. Listening to their problems and assisting in achieving a solution by helping them in problem solving is a sign of a good leader.
In contrast, Leaders cannot be always successful with the responsibilities, some are born to be leaders with an attitude to support the team. when they fail and things get out of control leader takes the blame. When team makes the goal and good profit then giving credit to the team instead of taking credit on oneself is a leader.
Parents of the family are generally the leaders of home. If parent fulfills the goals set by their family, then family will be happy. Passing knowledge and skills to live good life and teaching good code of conduct will be beneficial to the family.
In sum being a good leader and being a leader by the burden imposed is two different aspects. One who can lead the team without extraneous treatment is a good leader. Other with burden, forcing employees to fulfill the goal is a leader.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...s with an attitude to support the team. when they fail and things get out of control...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'then', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275555555556 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.186666666667 0.157235817809 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0711111111111 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0266666666667 0.0497285424764 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0222222222222 0.0444667217837 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102222222222 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0755555555556 0.0406280797675 186% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.69119138945 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.04 0.030933414821 129% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.12 0.0997080785238 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0177777777778 0.0249443105267 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177777777778 0.0148568991511 120% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1183.0 2732.02544248 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 452.878318584 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6875 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.58838876751 83% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360576923077 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264423076923 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129807692308 0.200843997647 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0961538461538 0.132149295362 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69119138945 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 219.290929204 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543269230769 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 49.312924391 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3333333333 23.380412469 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6467326517 59.4972553346 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5833333333 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 23.380412469 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 43.7756410256 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.92452830189 1.64882698954 117% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282425795446 0.391690518653 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119507777674 0.123202303941 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0448218928584 0.077325440228 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.667451150895 0.547984918172 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132229831849 0.149214159877 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132995325067 0.161403998019 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494196170137 0.0892212321368 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.23757149872 0.385218514788 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0631270760514 0.0692045440612 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176004733592 0.275328986314 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531531171392 0.0653680567796 81% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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