College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
College students should study what they like and there are many places where one can get a job but all types of jobs does not offer good wages and perquisites. Content in oneself is the key of life.
In contrast if there are lot of job openings in a specific profession, then opting that field of study in the college will be beneficial to those who want to make good wages and prosper in their career.
Getting a job by studying in the field of the job is not the only requirement, other factors such as attitude towards a job, experience in the field and dedication to the job also plays a vital role in hiring processes.
In conclusion students should base their field of study in college based on the availability of the job depends on the interest of the student and economic status where being satiated with the job is the key.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ent in oneself is the key of life. In contrast if there are lot of job openings in a s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283950617284 0.240241500013 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.141975308642 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0679012345679 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0246913580247 0.0497285424764 50% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0246913580247 0.0444667217837 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.154320987654 0.12292977631 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0432098765432 0.0406280797675 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43731497778 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0185185185185 0.030933414821 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.12962962963 0.0997080785238 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0246913580247 0.0249443105267 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0246913580247 0.0148568991511 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 836.0 2732.02544248 31% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 452.878318584 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 6.0361032391 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.58838876751 77% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.24025974026 0.366273622748 66% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201298701299 0.280924506359 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123376623377 0.200843997647 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0584415584416 0.132149295362 44% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.43731497778 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 219.290929204 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 50.7018824854 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 30.8 23.380412469 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0420763402 59.4972553346 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.2 141.124799967 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 23.380412469 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 0.674092028746 237% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 50.9298701299 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 2.51612903226 1.64882698954 153% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50637144123 0.391690518653 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.220660037797 0.123202303941 179% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.148867403312 0.077325440228 193% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.842134537054 0.547984918172 154% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.240337839251 0.149214159877 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.308230250447 0.161403998019 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121204333846 0.0892212321368 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362533927138 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107700852439 0.0692045440612 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351301791106 0.275328986314 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924726565647 0.0653680567796 141% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 13.5995575221 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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