Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement claims that demands exist first, then the existence of leaders follows. Leaders are those who lead and command and fulfill certain purposes, which is the reason for them to be created. On the other hand, one can make himself as the leader and force what he leads accept it. But it seldom happens and usually immoral and illegal. In general, leaders are made because they are in need. I therefore agree with the claim.
leaders are created when there are needs for them. Particular conditions demand different kinds of able people who have certain skills or intelligence. Depending on the field, the demands could mean differently. For example, A company will need someone who could save it from going bankrupt when it keeps going downhill. When Apple continued to recede in 1990s, and it had the demands for someone who could lead them to win the competition in the era of technology. In response to the needs, Steve Jobs returned to Apple as its CEO. The demands for someone who is creative and has foresight created the position for Steve Jobs to take and be the leader. So, leaders are often created by the demands placed on them.
Some leaders are born with power, which seems to contradict with the topic but actually not. They are also put on the position by the demand. One becomes the leader because he qualifies. In this case, the blood makes them qualify for being the leaders. For example, Elizabeth II is the queen of many countries, including the United Kingdom and Canada now. After she retires or dies, her son or eldest grandson, Prince Charles or Prince William respectively, will be the next king. One of them has to be the king because the system needs one, which is the demand. As we can see, one inherit the power as well as the need of them.
It is not always that the demand comes first. Some leaders forced others to accept them as the leaders out of their own interest. For example, Napoleon, the famous French military leader and emperor invaded much of Europe in the early nineteenth century. Those countries conquered by him apparently did not place the demand on him. His being the leader is imposed to his victims. As we can see, not all leaders are created by demand. However, cases like these are usually immoral or illegal, and it rarely happens in modern society. I therefore still believe that normally leaders are created by demands placed on them.
In conclusion, there seem to be many reasons for one to become the leader; yet, there are usually some kind of demands behind it. There are some unusual ways for leaders to be created, but oftentimes they are not acceptable morally or legally. Hence, the claim is reasonable in general.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
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arguments: OK
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flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.273 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 33 15
No. of Words: 471 350
No. of Characters: 2151 1500
No. of Different Words: 230 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.659 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.567 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.229 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.273 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.16 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.576 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.255 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.418 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Leaders
...d. I therefore agree with the claim. leaders are created when there are needs for th...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1990s'.
Suggestion: in the 1990s
...ownhill. When Apple continued to recede in 1990s, and it had the demands for someone who...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...the leader; yet, there are usually some kind of demands behind it. There are some un...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'apparently', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'as for', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in general', 'kind of', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201127819549 0.240241500013 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.18045112782 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0526315789474 0.0880659088768 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0582706766917 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0657894736842 0.0444667217837 148% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116541353383 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0394736842105 0.0406280797675 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33026057796 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0244360902256 0.030933414821 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0902255639098 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015037593985 0.0249443105267 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225563909774 0.0148568991511 152% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2701.0 2732.02544248 99% => OK
No of words: 471.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73460721868 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339702760085 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252653927813 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123142250531 0.200843997647 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0700636942675 0.132149295362 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33026057796 2.79330140395 83% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 219.290929204 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498938428875 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 57.5080511208 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6194690265 160% => OK
Sentence length: 14.2727272727 23.380412469 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5225552285 59.4972553346 50% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8484848485 141.124799967 58% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 23.380412469 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.674092028746 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 39.538120054 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.17283950617 1.64882698954 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.508894244293 0.391690518653 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0717418568272 0.123202303941 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785683470532 0.077325440228 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.4341805381 0.547984918172 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134250859052 0.149214159877 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175214181266 0.161403998019 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082824788182 0.0892212321368 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.428592738264 0.385218514788 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0725283864159 0.0692045440612 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.358597599357 0.275328986314 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719042688312 0.0653680567796 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 27.0 13.5995575221 199% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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