How to choose good and relevant leader ? A leader should be prudent and wise, and able to make quick and accurate decision in any situation having circumstances good or bad. As the leader is created by majority of the people in a society, it should be helpful, demand fulfiller, trustworthy, loyal and honest with the people of his society. Yes, I agree with the author who suggest or define that “ leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.” As the demands in different society varies, consequently leaders in the society also varies.
Firstly, leader should be passed through all needs which included in materialistic needs such as physiological, security, social recognition,etc. Leader should have experienced all such needs to know the values of different needs. If he or she having good experience with them then he will be able to understand demands of the people in his society and shall implement require measures. For example, in a small society the people are concerned about sanitation problem, irregular water pipeline problem, electricity problem,etc. If leader is created by the demands that are placed on him, it will be done his work properly in society.
Secondly, leader should be trustworthy, friendly and sociable, responsible, and posses experience in a particular field. He/she should have educated. Moreover, despite of demand fulfiller, leader should not create indifference among the people as he was chosen by majority of the people in a society. For example, India is having a good leader as present prime minister Mr. Narendra Modi who is sociable, responsible, and passed through needs of life from tea maker to prime minister. He not only sociable with the people of his country but also with leaders of different nation such as US, Iran, Japan,etc.
Moreover, a good leader who is demand fulfiller should not come under the umbrella of corruption and should not use excessive use of power as it is elected by majority of people having trust on him. He or she must use restraint power which he possess.
In conclusion, a good leader should be demand fulfiller, responsible, well experienced and skillful, should not be philistine, sociable with the people in its society. In addition, he or she must have restraint use of power because overuse of power may leads to corruption and other problems in a society. Therefore, demands in a society or nation create a leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07980049875 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85499431693 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438902743142 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6058358095 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.210526316 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05263157895 5.21951772744 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12948484238 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520387399465 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382443858036 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881070606077 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299737470787 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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