In today’s fast evolving world, two factors play key role to motivate human beings. First is money and second is time. Also, classical thinkers believe that money is the only motivating factor for a person. This money comes in the form of salary from a business. People try to control number of business to accomplish various needs which include physiological need, esteem need, security need, etc. Although some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business, other prefer to work for an employer. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the statement which states that people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. There are several reasons for my choice. I have explored my views in the following lines.
First and foremost, as I have said earlier that today’s generation is money oriented, I believe that a perfect way to earn money is to own a business. There are many benefits to own a business. First, we can make a great collection of profit. Also, in that case, we act as a controller for a whole business. To illustrate, we are manager, accountant, advisor, etc. In addition, there are less conflicts to work on ourself. On the other hand, typically, there are daily conflicts between higher authority and lower authority in an organization because there views sometimes do not match to each other.
Secondly, the most advantage to own a business or to work for ourselves is that there is not any pressure from higher authority (boss) like in large organization. Since higher authority implement pressure to perform a particular work, it introduces stress and tense atmosphere among employers. The reason is that stress induces when there is work demand to be completed in specific amount of time. Furthermore, in some companies, we hear or read or listen many cases around us, that a female employer is abused and molested by higher authority employer by enticing her with incentive such as promotion. Hence, in some instances, it is harmful to work as an employer in the large company.
However, work for an employer in large organization familarise a person with co-operative environment. Various employers in different organization work in synergy and develop strong bond. Moreover, when we work in a group, workload is distributed between members of a group, and the task or work appears as easy going. More importantly, some big organisation provide many facilities to their employers as an incentive to attract them like travel insurance, health insurance, bus services, etc. These facilities save much more money of an employer. On the other hand, a small business or a work for ourselves do not possess such facilities. Also, some large governmental organization provide retirement age to live remaining life with dignity.
In sum, it is evident from the above discussion that there are many advantages of owning a business. What’s more, these pros overweight over the advantages of working as an employer. Hence, if had to recommend, I strongly contends that we have to work for ourselves or we can own our business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03125 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89733174662 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482421875 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.0 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1020479655 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0967741935 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5161290323 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93548387097 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424127719288 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110999521196 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129144676136 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24168633087 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823103340391 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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