The author in this statement argues that the best way for any society to prepare its youth people for leadership or hegemony in any field is by filling emotions in them a sense of cooperation rather than competition. Although some people believe that cooperation plays vital role in any field to dissolve a certain issue from any topic, other believe that competition is the best way to extract a good leader from flippant candidates. As far as I am concerned, I can disagree with the author. Since cooperation is way for good hegemony, but not best. Cooperation is defined as work performed by a group of people by synergy.
Firstly, competition in any field like industry, government, etc act as an incentive. To achieve best position in any field, we require to face competition. For example, in education system, teacher also compete with other teacher to jockey higher position in hierarchy. As their promotion is utterly based on their performance or project published or number of research papers published, they compete with each other. Even in political system, leader possess huge competition among them to achieve pinnacle of the hierarchy. In such cases, cooperation does not play significant role.
Secondly, competition is indispensible to extract a good leader in all fields. Moreover, in large countries such as India, China, etc issue can hardly be solve by cooperation. All such countries necessarily require competition to extract good leader from public. For example, in India, after vast competition between two major parties Indian National Congress and BJP, Mr, Narendra Modi extracted for leadership in India only through competition, and it is not a not a bad leader.
To take a slightly tangential view, cooperation plays significant role to resolve any issue in industry or any field, in such cases competition role is considered as trivial. For example, in industry massive problem occurs and it is unlikely to solve by an individual person. So, it can be a only way to resolve via group discussion among managers of that company. When they will cooperate among themselves and through final discussion best way to out from difficulty will generate and in that case, can it is possible fine solution via competition? Obviously, not.
In summary, as there advantages of competition in any field influence on advantages of competition, we should not prepare our youth by instilling in them with an emotion of cooperation. Although cooperation also plays important role in certain situation, but it cannot be consider as the best way in all fields. As competition is indispensible to extract a good leader in any field, also it act as an incentive to promote people in all field, we should always orient our youth to compete more rather than to cooperate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2335.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10940919037 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93901189856 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459518599562 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6450749991 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.136363636 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7727272727 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296544076843 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787962312515 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939226180974 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16174444107 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927313541201 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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