Local innovation and initiative can help us better understand how to protect our environment.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
" The greatest threat to our plant is belief that, someone will save that plant " before thinking of that why don't we stood up by our self and take obligation to save it? In above mentioned statement author is questioning that, will local innovation or initiative helps us to understand about protecting environment? " Yes" surely it will. Thus i firmly agree with broadly stated author's view. As to initiate among the people one must have the adherence of the authority or organisation such as municipal corporation. To have positiveness among the people about our innovation one must not relinquish the initiative.
One general reason of my belief comes from the example of people like saint gadgebaba, who is the first man who took a stand among people of Maharashtra( one of the biggest states among India) about cleanness. His legacy is still uphold by the people in Maharashtra, which obviously plays adequate role in protecting our environment. During local initiative make people persuade you by telling them awareness about cleanness and moral responsibilities which do matter for protecting our environment.it will surely help us to save our environment and make it better.
The another example is aware the local people about non-renewable sources how they are in danger? what causes made so? Tell people about more use of renewable sources such as sun, and less wastage and haphazardly use of endangered sources. Initiation in local area will encourage such kind of activities which indirectly help us to carry out the quest of protecting environment.
One of the crucial factor which needed to be save for better tomorrow is the growing more and more greenery, and efficiently preserve them. initiative will help to make rise in greenery in locality and Eco-friendliness among people. In nutshell, someone said " before thinking of make change globally, you must start changing it personally" this makes me think, as to save our environment from the crisis like global environment we must start protecting and uphold our nature deliberately.This make happens only by taking initiation among the people and start implementing moral responsibilities carefully to save our nature. In today's life people took initiation only for their greed and avarice such as politicians. They keep talking evasively among people which totally bombastic in reality. So i think people are better off with acquiring initiative to protect environment rather than stand up as politician.
In order to sum up i'd like to underscore that Local innovation and initiative can help us better understand how to protect our environment. To gain protecting our environment initiative must persuade the quote cited by the Dayan lovely" even in the midst of the storm, the sun is still shining" likewise one must initiate like a sun to protect our Environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ra one of the biggest states among India about cleanness. His legacy is still uph...
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...ent rather than stand up as politician. In order to sum up id like to underscore...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'likewise', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'as to', 'i think', 'kind of', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.158203125 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.072265625 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.044921875 0.0497285424764 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0625 0.0444667217837 141% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.1328125 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.03515625 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03440091239 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.033203125 0.030933414821 107% => OK
Particles: 0.009765625 0.0016655270985 586% => OK
Determiners: 0.056640625 0.0997080785238 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025390625 0.0249443105267 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.021484375 0.0148568991511 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2892.0 2732.02544248 106% => OK
No of words: 461.0 452.878318584 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27331887202 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362255965293 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258134490239 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201735357918 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167028199566 0.132149295362 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03440091239 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 219.290929204 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490238611714 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 55.7816176007 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9523809524 23.380412469 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.3171334374 59.4972553346 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.714285714 141.124799967 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9523809524 23.380412469 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.7658299762 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.57352941176 1.64882698954 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440794493069 0.391690518653 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112897492722 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0950203078541 0.077325440228 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471648688246 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170630426259 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156209294533 0.161403998019 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912880695199 0.0892212321368 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343942122084 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0330227687741 0.0692045440612 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299840200632 0.275328986314 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641407810602 0.0653680567796 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.