The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times

We often imagine that there are some fundamental differences between people living now and people who lived in earlier times; however, we will also presume that people nowadays and people in history are largely germane to each other. I am assured that both of them are illusions that could be dispelled by reading history, and besides dispelling illusions, the main benefit of reading history is to know how to understand ourselves in current society.

One benefit of the study of history, as the statement has noticed, is to dispel our illusion that people living in different eras are significantly different. However, people tend to make similar mistakes; and moreover, there is something constant in human nature, making history repeats itself. Many people will likely to assert that with the changing of time, our world is generally progressive and going towards a new path. However, by learning what has happened in history, they will find many events are reminiscent of the past. After WWI, nations endeavored to prevent another devasting war by signing peace deals and limiting weapons. However, some nations continued in the arm races that certainly destroyed their dreams again. Moreover, some constancy in human nature will also be revealed by studying history. People will learn emperors, political leaders, or ordinary people, haunted by greed, selfishness or pride, faulting in critical moments, and thus bringing about devasting outcomes. Those constant elements of human natures can also be learned by historical study.

However, though I concede that historical study will help us learn constancy in history, I believe that learning about differences is also a main benefit brought by studying history. History is made up by various situations, social milieu, economic conditions, and so on. All those varibles contributes to different problems people in a certain period and locale need to face. By studying history, we will learn that different historical events happen in significantly different situations. And by learning that, we will be more open-minded to reckon on real-world problems --- how the situation is differed from the past, and what new methods or innovations should be taken to handle the emerging trouble. To conclude, learning history is now all about figuring our similarity, but also knowing about differences across space and time.

For the final analysis, I think the most important benefit of history study is to understand the present and provide insights into real-world problem solving. I am fully convinced that, all of those benefits by learning history will contribute to a better understanding of the present, and thus making people more equipped to solve real-world problems. After understanding the particularities and the similarities, we will be more informed in viewing the present by comparing ourselves to historical figures or events. For example, knowing about the tragedy of WWII, we will be cautious about dictatorship, populism, and violence, thus eliminating possible signs of war to provide current people a peaceful future.

To conclude, the main benefit of study of history is not limited to learning the similarity of historical events or human natures. It is also about knowing about differences and changes. But more fundamentally, understanding of the past provides insights into the future.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2850.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41825095057 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85093234651 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488593155894 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 901.8 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.77640449438 619% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8445486268 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04166666667 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341464561959 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09155942744 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105991725261 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210330419818 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121330852266 0.0667264976115 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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