The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement

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The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position

Individuals are shaped not only shaped by present scenarios but definitely by the events that occur in the past. Studying history plays significant role in guiding us through a certain time frame.Main benefit of studying history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are much different from people living in previous era. Historical knowledge goes beyond

clarifying a illusion, moreover, it shapes our mind and prepare us for a grater time travel for vast enlightenment .

The main goal for studying history is to understand the evolution of humanity and various processes associated with it.

History traces our development over time,both humanity and environment, discovery of new places. It helps us to learn about our roots. By studying history, it has become clear how 21st century civilization has been shaped by our ancestors who plays surprisingly crucial role.

When we study certain pages of history before taking a paramount decision, be it changes in government or introduction of new policy, history helps us to trace how same situation was perceived by people. Looking back at the harmful effect of WWI and WWII makes us aware of such devastation and insists us to prevent it. Similarly, harmful destruction by nuclear bomb was seen which united the countries to ban this destructive weapon. Moreover, history helps us to decide both the path toward success and failure making us aware and wise.Judicious decision is possible after the proper understanding of History.

Therefore, studying history helps us to extract information about the functioning of worlds.It is a significant tool not only to present light on significant differences among people of different time period ,but also to shape our present living and directing towards prosperous future through past knowledge and experience.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37630662021 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91732796736 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2072329291 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.583333333 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20351250399 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068928332631 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108191838635 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107944102302 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100177120738 0.0667264976115 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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