Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks
Men and women are equally suited for many tasks inspite of their inherent physical differences as it all depends on their inherent strength to do the tasks.
In the earlier days,there were many tasks which were only done by men as it was thought women were not suited for those tasks due to their inherent differences.Many of the tasks which were previously done only by men are being done by women today.Previously in the factories there used to be only male employees.But now there are many female employees along with men in factories as women are equally capable of doing the tasks which are done in factories.In the construction of buildings work there are male workers and female workers to to do the tasks which involve carrying heavy rocks from one place to other place.It is not the case that only men or only women are capable of doing these tasks as both men and women are equally capable of doing these tasks.Women are equally capable of doing the work men can do.It all depends on their strength to do it.A physically strong woman can do the work which even the men whose strength is weaker compared to that woman cannot do it.It is not that only men can do many tasks because of inherent physical differences between men and women.It also depends on their stamina to do it.Carpentry work was earlier done only by men.But this work is also done by women.There were only men in the military army previously as it was thought that women were not capable of doing the tasks which are done in military army.Women are also now being employed in military forces like army and navy as they are equally capable of doing the tasks in military forces.There are rare cases where only men are capable of doing specific tasks.
Men and women are equally suited for many tasks as we can see in the world that there are only few tasks which men can only do.Both men and women are employed to do many tasks as both are equally capable of doing most of the tasks .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.6327345309 173% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 16.3942115768 6% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 353.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56940509915 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41235825984 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 204.123752495 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.331444759207 0.468620217663 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 705.55239521 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 19.7664670659 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 117.0 22.8473053892 512% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 648.452516894 57.8364921388 1121% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 537.666666667 119.503703932 450% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 117.666666667 23.324526521 504% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.70786347227 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437337297351 0.218282227539 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.463046187501 0.0743258471296 623% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148082469307 0.0701772020484 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.463046187501 0.128457276422 360% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148082469307 0.0628817314937 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 58.9 14.3799401198 410% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -38.82 48.3550499002 -80% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 47.7 12.197005988 391% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.41 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.32208582834 137% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 98.500998004 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 12.3882235529 218% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 48.8 11.1389221557 438% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 11.9071856287 495% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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