Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Whenever a human born his/her gender, body structure were decided by their parents genes. Men and women do have a different body structure but as per the promt they are not suited for many tasks equally. I strongly disagree with the promts claim. I will provide following three reasons for supporting my position.
Firstly, for performing any task, individual should have confidence and urge to do that task rather than specific body structure . For instance, one of my male friend is enough rich, so sometimes he do not perform office task properly on ther side my other female friend who is in need and she is not that mufinancially strong. She is very confident and she has urge to work for her family. She perfom very well in many hazardous task and many male cannot do. So will power is more important to perform task.
Secondly, nowadays many women and men are working together to complete many complex tasks irrespective of their gender and body strtucture. For example, In 2010 there was one project performed by indian space research organisation (ISRO) named chandrayan 2.0. In this project many hazardous and tactical works performed by team of scientist which consist of 3 mens and 3 womens. Considering their success, goverment appreciated whole team that is the perfect example of working together forgetting body structure.
In Conclusion, there exist some time period like pregnancy and child care in which women needs break or they can't perform up to the mark during those days but except this situation I don't think that men and women are not equally suited for any work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hi'?
Suggestion: hi
Whenever a human born his/her gender, body structure were decided...
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Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...ividual should have confidence and urge to do that task rather than specific body str...
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...task rather than specific body structure . For instance, one of my male friend is ...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... friend is enough rich, so sometimes he do not perform office task properly on the...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...care in which women needs break or they cant perform up to the mark during those day...
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Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... those days but except this situation I dont think that men and women are not equall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 269.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91078066914 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53600952429 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6684812376 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318478666634 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109990861254 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979822283243 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189395841746 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351395600856 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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