Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.a
Nature has created men and women physically different. The difference in the male and female anatomy is to enable both the genders to cater to different aspects of a successful society. Thus, to consider them equally suited for all tasks is inaccurate.
Firstly, if we look at any mammal- be it human or a lion- the nature has a fixed role for them to play. In case of lions, the male lion is responsible for protecting the female and offsprings, and for gathering food. The role of female lions is to feed its cubs. All other animals follow their nature-decided role by the book. It is only us- humans- who in the name of bringing equality among the genders try to do things not intended to be done by us. If we look at male body, it is designed for endurance and thus, men usually have large stamina and strength to do physical work. The female body is relatively weak and cannot physically exert much. On the contrary, female body is designed to withstand emotional stress and is gifted with the ability to give birth and feed children. No human can say which is more difficult, but, it can be said with guarantee that the physical differences play a huge role in what tasks can and cannot be done by them. Women cannot lift heavy loads and men cannot breastfeed children. The work done by both men and women is equally important, both address a different requirement in the society.
Secondly, women tend to be more calm and can think more clearly under stress whereas men are more aggressive in their tendency. This makes men more suited for roles that require a certain degree of aggressiveness and violent behavior such as soldiers or warriors. Women, due to their understanding nature, tend to be more suited for roleslike teachers and customer support representatives that require human-interaction and a certain degree of composure even under stress. The human anatomy is designed in such a way so as to balance the behaviors of both these genders- aggressive men and composed women. This is not to say that men/women won't succeed in opposite roles, but, if they have to succeed, they may need to fight against their innate tendency. Thus, it seems fair to generalise that men and women, because of their physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Even though physical differences does have a role to play in what men and women can and cannot do, the motivation to do a work plays an even bigger role in their ability. For example, there are many successful women in the military and many successful men as professors/teachers. Thus, the gender should not be a restricting factor in prescribing what one should do, rather it should just be a guideline which should be ignored if the person has the will to do a particular task.
The differences in male and female anatomy plays a huge role in deciding the best roles for men and women. Due to these differences, both men and women are not equally suited for many tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 518, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...human anatomy is designed in such a way so as to balance the behaviors of both these gen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2449.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 518.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7277992278 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71905491694 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434362934363 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.157798804 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.96 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.72 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390911978774 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131408675675 0.0831039109588 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158738661283 0.0758088955206 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258676885944 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110670236616 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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