Men and women due to their physical differences cannot work on some tasks.

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Men and women due to their physical differences cannot work on some tasks.

Equality has always been a topic for public discussions for a long time now. Men and women definitely are suitable for performing similar tasks but the outcome of those tasks may differ. There are multiple scenarios where physical differences of men and women do indicate differences in performance of tasks. I believe, men and women are equally suited to do many tasks but in general there are differences when considering the performance of the tasks.

The most physically challenging tasks are performed in military. It is the perfect example for showcasing this particular issue. Men and women equally participate in various duties of military. Although there are more men in military than women, it does not indicate it's because of physical differences but because of choices people make in life. Apart from the desk jobs involved in military I do believe due to physical differences in men and women, men tend to be more productive in the field but there too are multiple women doing better jobs and are being more productive than men.

Another area where men and women recenlty started competing together is bodybuilding competitions. This has been a field for men for a long time now. Women are competing not just within themselves in this category but also with men. There are multiple cases which directly negates the issue topic when women won competitions involving both categories. This indicates, physical differences are not within the category of men and women but are infered by many due to choices they make.

Finally, all the tasks involving physical work like carpenting, cutting wood, plumbing etc, are job mostly performed by men. There are women involved in those tasks as well but the ratio is way beyond equal. This is another example where men and women are capabale of doing similar tasks but are not considered as doing them due to number of men and women involved in these jobs.

I would say men and women are equally suited for many tasks but considering generally, it's a relative statement. I believe its the choices people make in life that define if they are capable of doing the job or not. So, men and women can perform similar tasks irrespective of their physical differences.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, well, apart from, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97050938338 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6516954505 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436997319035 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.387210097 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37045053643 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130378645063 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940673276584 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231153295196 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038785100878 0.0667264976115 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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