Most people prefer restrictions and regulations to absolute freedom of choice, although they would probably deny such a preference.
rules and regulations are the fundamental aspects of the society. Such laws help to maintain a uniform system for a uniform approach. people should abide by these rules and strictly follow them. Every person in this world is born free and has the freedom to perceive whatever he or she wishes to do. However, if everyone start thinking only about themselves and start behaving in the manner they like, we will have a haphazard system. therefore, man made rules and regulations to maintain the decorum of the society and make people follow a well structured approach.
A person is granted his or her freedom of choice to choose their field of proficiency. there are no restrictions in selecting which particular school to join or which college education program to take or which brand of clothing to wear and so on. but once the choice is selected, there are certain terms concerned with the respective organization that we must abide by. if the conditions are not fulfilled properly, the organization has the right to take the appropriate measures to maintain the conduct. For example, a company follows a dress code that includes a formal shirt, tie, trouser and shoes. this dress code is a sign of conduct to maintain the decorum of the organization. if an employee walks in wearing a casual wear outfit, he or she will be reprimanded and will not be allowed to enter the organization. The person in this case cannot say that he or she has the right to freedom of choice and that he or she can wear clothes of his or her choice.
Nevertheless, people often demand for their right to freedom of choice because they feel that the system tries to force their ideals upon them. they have freedom to choose a particular field but they feel that their scope is limited because of the restrictions put up on them and hence demand for absolute freedom without any bounds and restrictions. freedom of choice means that people get to decide what they want to do and how they plan to do it. but even though they have the freedom of choice, the choice selected should not affect any other person directly or indirectly.
However, if people are given an absolute freedom of choice, they tend to get confused with all the freedom and find it difficult to choose a particular path from a myriad of options. it is similar to the case when a person wins a lottery. he or she does not know how what to do with all the wealth and sometimes make decisions which prove to be detrimental. restrictions and regulations therefore help individuals to limit their choices and make proper decisions. Most people, therefore prefer to have restrictions and regulations in their day to day activities, so that they have a proper idea about what is acceptable and what is not. With this knowledge it is easier for them to follow a proper social conduct.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2338.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71370967742 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64886824732 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445564516129 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1204514573 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95833333333 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221902221418 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567310153915 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575104114291 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138553079358 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674070125315 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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