A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The Diversity in course curriculum can become daunting for students , on the other hand these courses offer a suprficial view of a major field or sector, in the form of a small course inside a curriculum.Although it can hamper some students performance as well as gear up students for the more perplexing college courses we take a look at all of these points below.
Firstly, a fixed but rigorous curriculum is sure to enthrall students in some courses and other courses may also appear jejune to most of the students.For example the subject maths is known to be infamous among students for it's intricacy ,nevertheless it provides the core foundation to many college streams such as engineering and even the unsuspecting medical field also has a touch of mathematics such as gene theory which uses permutations to calculate the offspring genes.
Secondly, colleges prepare a curriculum that can be accessible to everyone with very minimum pre-requisites to the courses.If a common curriculum was not followed by schools, it would become chaotic to say the less.Students with different skills and different mindsets, pursuing a common course in college would not attain the same learning experience as the other.Many school curriculum are known to skip programming in their curriculum or provide a very superficial view of the subject.Colleges offering computer science are aware of this discrepancy and try to make a course curriculum befitting for all categories of students and in doing so, students of the other demographic who are well versed in programming pass the course in a breeze putting less to no effort .This might seem unfair to rest of the students who have not learned programming as eruditly as the others and may cause a sense of unrest in their minds.
Although a fixed curriculum provied a semblance to be without loopholes, it's biggest drawback is the abundance of courses. While it is necessary for students to experience all types of courses before choosing their stream, the process is too tedious for some and they fallout or unfortunately fail due to courses not under their command.Take a simple example, students trying to pursue art in the future may find mathematics to be troublesome and even on studying dilligently might not be enough for some students to pass the course and hence pass the whole semester.Einstien had quoted the famous quote " judging a fish to climb tree is stupid", this same analogy applies to students who are the fish in the bowl and they are asked to perform all the tasks raning from swiming to climbing a tree!
In conclusion, a nation wide rigorous curriculum is required in order for students to explore all possible fields before sticking to a single field and working on it.This curriculum should also have a certain flexibility in which passing criteria should be modified for students looking pursue field that are in contrast with the courses they are being offered
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2466.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0636550308 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98211715212 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507186858316 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 23.0359550562 421% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 347.348585718 60.3974514979 575% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 493.2 118.986275619 415% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.4 23.4991977007 414% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.6 5.21951772744 720% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210517047256 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113988687804 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504318055132 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133351029618 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503279344217 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.1 14.1392134831 361% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.98 48.8420337079 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.1 12.1743820225 338% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.18 8.38706741573 145% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 11.2143820225 364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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