Educators should take students' interests into account when planning the content of the courses they teach.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The education policy and curriculum is always set and managed by experts, who have nothing but positive intent towards the children and also are adapting to newer generation needs.However the idea that students should play a role in deciding or suggesting the structure of courses can cause certain skepticism.
In any business or any well established industry, feedback from the customer is often treated as the highest resource available, as it helps the industry better cater to the customer needs.This same analogy should not be applied to the education system as the common misunderstanding of schools and colleges as just a monetary structure should be extirpated.As students are not analogous to customers as they are often naive and tyro when it comes to designing the courses.If given the opportunity they might suggest to truncate courses so they have more time for extra curricular activities!
With a burgeon of population, there seems to be a huge flux of students being admitted to various schools.Giving these students the option to select their own curriculum would actually be quite impractical! Surveys have also shown how parents having more than one child, are known to put double the effort as each child has their unique needs.If this was the case for children at their adobes, then it is surely quixotic for schools to establish a curriculum containing every student’s courses and even if certain majority prevails among the student’s selection the minority will feel neglected if their courses are not added and during the schooling period a certain bias or rift will be created among the students which is not very good for their social health.
There are plenty of reasons why this policy would seem impractical , although when taking account for a small sample such as a school where the students can normally make requests to their headmasters or other authorities in adding certain courses or subjects deemed necessary by the whole population of the sample.This type of flexible system can become utopia for students if implemented within a sub system.Students shall be able to submit their courses they wish to be supplicated, even if the courses demanded are different, the institution can create separate classes for respective courses desired.
In conclusion the matter at hand depends on whether the policy is implemented in a huge region such a nation, if so then it would become very difficult to manage such a huge repository of students and their course suggestions.However when taking schools or colleges of small regions, it is possible to create such an environment to facilitate almost all the courses demanded by students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, then, well, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20601851852 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9205495608 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550925925926 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 108.0 23.0359550562 469% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 416.565346014 60.3974514979 690% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 562.25 118.986275619 473% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 108.0 23.4991977007 460% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.75 5.21951772744 398% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17517623478 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103697802149 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321840467818 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096423769405 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248467535532 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 57.1 14.1392134831 404% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -38.14 48.8420337079 -78% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.92365168539 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.4 12.1743820225 373% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.2 8.38706741573 157% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 45.2 11.2143820225 403% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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