Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Voting is a right and duty of every citizen which should be followed strictly.Although, this does not mean that anyone should be able to vote. Children especially below the age of 18 should not be given this burden as they say: Great power comes with great responsibility.
Children are known to be naive and innocent by heart, and are also known to be politically unaware. Generally speaking, they lack the experience and knowledge of what will benefit the society, as well as them as an individual of that particular society. Take for example, a political campaign propounding that they would reduce unemployment by providing training sessions. This is a generally good solution to battle unemployment, however it does not concern children below the age of 18. Thus, they would not be able to understand what impact these propositions would have in their society. They might even go far, as to reject the candidate as they do not find the new rules comphrehensible.
A child of age 15, is generally considered a minor. Being in this age group imposes them not liable to sever legal punishments such as the infamous death sentence. As they are young and immature, the legal system has to be lenient with them. But, there are politicians who take advantage of it, by manipulating minors. They do as they are told , either by threat or by reward and it's mostly done by using peer pressure. Hence, it would not be fitting to involve children in the dirty game of politics.
I would like to conclude, that children below 15 should not be given the opportunity to vote. As they are unable to make the right decisions for themselves, let alone the nation. It would be disasterous to put the future of a nation in naive and unaware children, who although have their own concern for the nation, but they do not have the maturity to comprehend the politics behind elections and political parties
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Although
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, thus, well, as to, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79754601227 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80937078807 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9247562193 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196075357854 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685279579396 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585107027572 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136895778319 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525162891498 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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