Jenny is conducting a research project on cell phone use. The chart shows the percentage of students, and parents of students, at Jenny’s school who owned cell phone over a 14 year period. The table provides the cell phone ownership rate nationwide over the same timeframe.
The line chart indicates the percentage of people owning a cell phone in Jenny's school from 2002 to 2016.Moreover, the seperate blue and red curves indicate students at Jenny's school and their parents respectively.
The graph clearly indicates a surge in ownership of cell phones over the 14 year period, with the count for students owning cellphones being closer to the parents in 2016 than it was in 2002.It can also be noted in 2012 the slope of the blue line becomes steeper, hence depicting a dramatic increase in ownership by students.
In 2002, approximately 50% of parents in Jenny's school owned a cell phone,meanwhile the nationwide population owning a phone was only 60%.Also, during this period students at Jenny's school who owned a cell phone was quite rare , comprising of less than 5% of all the students.
Although by 2016 96% of the nation owned a cellphone,Jenny's school consisted less than 95% of parents who owned a cellphone.Meanwhile,students consisted of approximately 75% who owned a cell phone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...hone in Jennys school from 2002 to 2016.Moreover, the seperate blue and red curves indic...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...the parents in 2016 than it was in 2002.It can also be noted in 2012 the slope of ...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , meanwhile
...ents in Jennys school owned a cell phone,meanwhile the nationwide population owning a phon...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
... population owning a phone was only 60%.Also, during this period students at Jennys ...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ol who owned a cell phone was quite rare , comprising of less than 5% of all the s...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: COMPRISING_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or 'consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
...who owned a cell phone was quite rare , comprising of less than 5% of all the students. Alth...
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Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Jennys
...2016 96% of the nation owned a cellphone,Jennys school consisted less than 95% of paren...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...an 95% of parents who owned a cellphone.Meanwhile,students consisted of approximately 75%...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , students
... parents who owned a cellphone.Meanwhile,students consisted of approximately 75% who owne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07738095238 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42456867354 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9165984724 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 213.25 112.824112599 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 22.9334400587 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494408370444 0.215688989381 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.309626129126 0.103423049105 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812233458274 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309626129126 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812233458274 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.