Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Voting is a right and duty of every citizen which should be followed strictly.Although, this does not mean that anyone should be able to vote. Children especially below the age of 18 should not be given this burden as they say: Great power comes with great responsibility.
Children are known to be naive and innocent by heart, and are also known to be politically unaware. Generally speaking, they lack the experience and knowledge of what will benefit the society, as well as them as an individual of that particular society. Take for example, a political campaign propounding that they would reduce unemployment by providing training sessions. This is a generally good solution to battle unemployment, however it does not concern children below the age of 18. Thus, they would not be able to understand what impact these propositions would have in their society. They might even go far, as to reject the candidate as they do not find the new rules comphrehensible.
A child of age 15, is generally considered a minor. Being in this age group imposes them not liable to sever legal punishments such as the infamous death sentence. As they are young and immature, the legal system has to be lenient with them. But, there are politicians who take advantage of it, by manipulating minors. They do as they are told , either by threat or by reward and it's mostly done by using peer pressure. Hence, it would not be fitting to involve children in the dirty game of politics.
I would like to conclude, that children below 15 should not be given the opportunity to vote. As they are unable to make the right decisions for themselves, let alone the nation. It would be disasterous to put the future of a nation in naive and unaware children, who although have their own concern for the nation, but they do not have the maturity to comprehend the politics behind elections and political parties
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, thus, well, as to, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8036809816 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80937078807 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9123607394 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1176470588 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196075357854 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685279579396 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585107027572 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136895778319 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525162891498 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.