USA fish imports
The pie chart and table illustrate how fish imports in USA increased dramatically within the span of 12 years.The table provides the annual cost of imported fish in billions of dollars.Whereas, the pie chart is split into three regions which in turn tells us the proportionate fish exports of Canada,China and other countries.
The general trend of fish imports in USA has a positive slope and is increasing annually, along with the annual expenditure on fish imports. The pie charts also indicate that Canada was a major supplier in 1988 , however it's exports fell over the 12 years and in the year 2000 it contributed the least in fish exports than China or any other country. Meanwhile, during the same time span where Canada lowered it's exports, China kept on increasing them and in 2000 it stood with a remarkable contribution of 30% of the total fish USA had imported.
While China and Canada had a quite opposite fish export trend, other countries fluctuated in their exports. However, from 1988 to 1992 USA increased their fish imports from other countries by a huge margin than they did in 1988 and had spent about 8.52 billion which was 2 billion dollars more than the 1988 amount.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...that Canada was a major supplier in 1988 , however its exports fell over the 12 ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8487804878 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63446919484 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575609756098 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6019112141 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.666666667 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1666666667 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386062734591 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212635206 0.103423049105 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13910706391 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288734690832 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624044381018 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.