The maps below show the layout of James Park in 2017 and the proposed changes to the park in 2027.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The layout of James park had undergone major changes within a decade.Various new facilities and roads have been constructed, as well as some of them had been renovated .
Firstly, the demolition of the fountain paved the way for the science center to undergo expansion, along with a new garden being attached adjacent to the institue.In 2017 the path did not directly lead to the center but in 2027 the road was extended to connect the center and the garden, hence individuals can either visit the center or can opt to go to the garden directly.
Secondly, the playground in 2017 was much bigger and divided into two parts serving it's purpose for both toddlers and adults.However, 2027 the addition of a new theatre has replaced the playground for toddlers.Moreover the main playground had become the only playground in the park and two seperate entrances/exits had been connected to it unlike the single entrance/exit in 2017 .Visitors can visit the playground via the old pathway or they could also visit it directly by following the new road connecting the statue and the playground.
Lastly a gymnasium had been added in 2027, which had been installed adjacent to the playground itself and its entrance being connected to the main road containing the statue which lies almost near the center of James Park
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96363636364 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91304331218 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540909090909 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 22.4926829268 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.718692642 43.030603864 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.0 112.824112599 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 22.9334400587 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 5.23603664747 473% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11352034996 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778359288158 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344556806501 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778359288158 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344556806501 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 13.2329268293 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.9970731707 218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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