A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

In contrast to the statement, while I believe a country should set a core curriculum for most students below college level so they can acquire basic skills, it should also require some school to offer specialized training for talented students.

Students need to learn basic skills, and a nation curriculum can ensure students have the skills they will need in the future.Skill such as math and English are important to every student.math courses can enhance students’ logical thinking ability ,and English courses can help students communicate with people around the world.In addition, everyone is a citizen of a country.To exercise civil rights, students should also study history, law, and geography of their own country.With knowledge of law, scientists can protect their own property rights. The national curriculum should not cover all the aspects of the students growth but place more focus on the fundamental value system and moral standard.

Some people may claim that we should give the students the right to choose what they are interested in, such as Computer Science, Engineering and AI.However, it will cost a large amount of money to set so many different advance curriculum.For example, an advance computer science class will choose to hire a teacher with a great computer science background, and the salary we paid for a good computer science teacher is much more than a math teacher.More over, a school will need to hire lots of teacher with different high level skill, and it means they are expensive.As a result, it is not possible for every school to provide a wide range of course because of cost entailed.

Nevertheless, some students who are gifted in specific fields, such as music or math, should be sent to schools that specialized in relevant field.Talented students could be the next great science or artists , so society must develop their skills from a young age.For instance, if one high school students is good at singing, the high school should send her to specialist school that offers singing courses.Then the talents of the student can be further developed, and general school will not have to hire teachers to teach singing to a few students who are interested in.

In conclusion, a common core curriculum should be taught by most schools to ensure every students learns basic knowledge, but each nation should also assign some schools to teach specialized fields for talented students.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, such as, as a result, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16161616162 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73643470954 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517676767677 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 23.0359550562 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.284693636 60.3974514979 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 340.666666667 118.986275619 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.0 23.4991977007 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.1666666667 5.21951772744 559% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233016283622 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147296994563 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600066495897 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142612782195 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642194596625 0.0667264976115 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.9 14.1392134831 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.95 48.8420337079 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.1743820225 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 11.2143820225 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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