"A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college". Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. in developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Beyond Doubt, the statement : "A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college" can give rise to a lot of views and opinions. This statement is highly contentious in nature and different people have disparate opinions about it. Some may agree with this but others can't stand it at all.I am consonant with this topic at greater extent due to the following reasons.
Firstly, the use of same national curriculum for all leads to the sense of oneness in the country and discard any feeling of biasness leading this action to prove to be highly advantageous for the people. For example : a national language spoken by all binds the people of a country into one and decreases the confusion among them in verbal and written communication. Similarly, the one particular national curriculum if prepared in accordance with the situation of education in the country would lead to the betterment of education status in the country and would bring out national prosperity and development.
Secondly the requirement to study the same national curriculum to all the students till college helps for the right choice of career for the future and also the grading of the students. For instance : till college the physical and emotional growth of the students are due thus they are in position to correctly decide the field to go for life.They are mostly influenced by the seniors, parents and teachers and thus may opt for a path not favorable to them leading to overall disatisfaction and demotivation to excel in life. Furthermore , the same curriculum helps the students to assess their own capability to excel in a field with their counterparts.
Some people may argue that students requiring to study the same curriculum until they enter college would develop a sense of enforcement of a particular decision on them barring their freedom to choose their subject from an early age. This infact holds true for some cases but for the greater good it doesn't serve well. For example : If a student is not interested at all to study, they might opt to go for a job/study which doen't require academic studies for now but eventually in this changing world they would always be lacking in the communication and excellence for their whole life.
In conclusion, in my view of course a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum untill they enter colleges it leads to the overall betterment of the students and also creates a feeling of oneness amomg all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96018735363 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73277982326 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475409836066 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4998190794 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.923076923 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8461538462 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 5.21951772744 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389981398393 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148847306807 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984353226442 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242477665822 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651565778611 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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