A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
education is a very important part of one's life. you not only learn new things but you also discover yourself and identify your interests. there are many concepts in an education curriculum that are crucial for one's success irrespective of his/her interests but that does not mean that having specialized electives in a curriculum won't benefit a student.
If a nation has a standard national curriculum, it will surely ensure that each and every student has acquired basic knowledge about the world in which they live in. surely, it would make examinations and comparing student's knowledge simpler as everyone would be standing on the same level but this, however, ignores the fact that students having different background and interests can not perform equally in a standard exam. there is a famous saying that you can not judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree. thus, I feel that having a national curriculum until students enter college would not be a beneficial decision for a nation. I support having some common subjects in the national curriculum along with specialized subjects which a student can choose, according to his interests. however, having a standard national curriculum until students enter high-school would be beneficial as it would ensure that everyone is capable of performing basic tasks and has some knowledge in various subjects like history, science, mathematics etc. irrespective of his interests. they role of primary education would be to introduce various fields to the students so that they can learn about their interests. this would not only motivate students to learn about themselves but would also teach them about teamwork and how people with different interests can come together to create something that benefits the whole world.
According to Albert Einstein, every single person in this world is a genius. we just have to figure out the things in which we excel. thus, having same national curriculum along with specialized elective for students would be the best option for a nation.
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...igure out the things in which we excel. thus, having same national curriculum along ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16918429003 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68719187507 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498489425982 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0997421467 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.066666667 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258469428711 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940856444353 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797969789313 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174828307103 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410723373399 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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