A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

The curriculum shoukd be designed in a way which benefits the large group of students and consist of the courses which could provide for the development of the nation.I agree with the writer to some extent but there are some instance in which this would not provode a fruitful result .

If the curriculum is uniform throughtout the nation then it woud lay a fair platform for applying in the colleges and all the aspirants could be judged on the same level. This could help in avoiding any biasing .for instance ,Last year in Maharashtra ,India there was a situation in which the State board of Maharashtra implimented a rule of conducting a theory paper of 100 marks rather than 80 marks in theory paper and 20 in the internal performance of the ward. This change resulted in falling grades of the student studying in the stateboard . The CBSE and ICSE board continued to follow their regular grading system. The statebord students faced a lot of problem during admission in college.This situation would not have taken place if the curriculum was same nationwide.Adding to that ,different curriculum have different portion to study and have different methods of analysing the students' academics which again would in unfair for a few.

A nationwide uniform curriculum would be set in such a way that is will cover all the courses and requirements that is expect to be known by a student at that age and rather than studying about the foreign countries for example the students in india studing in CBSE and ICSE has more informtion about French revolution and vietnam war than the about their own country.

On the contrary, India being a multilingual country would face issue while setting the curriculum as students not learning their own mothertoungue is a primary concern in a country of cuture and can weaken the roots.

The nationwide curriculum could be a freat idea in some instances like providing the uniform base for competetion and setting the course according to the culture and requirement of the nation but could me a problemetic in few cases.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95415472779 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78016845039 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515759312321 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6137513081 60.3974514979 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.111111111 118.986275619 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7777777778 23.4991977007 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208235534632 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887645257268 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623016243698 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108675600557 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388216291891 0.0667264976115 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 14.1392134831 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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