More people are now behaving more violently in society than before. Can this behaviour be prevented? Discuss the causes and reasons for this trend. Provide examples to support your opinion.
Aggression and violence are the first instincts of people these days. I agree that more people are behaving violently in society. There could be multiple reasons for this behavioral pattern.
To begin with, the tolerating capability of people have decreased ,which is the result of the increasing pace of life , workload , office deadlines, college pressure and mental stress. People have been dealing with so much mentally that sometimes even the slightest of inconvenience may lead to a physical or verbal outburst. For example, after a log tiring day ,travelling in a metro ,even a little push can turn into a huge fight. Another reason for this is being in the state of denial of being mentally tired .So this stress finds violence as an outlet.
Another reason for this trend could be the influence of the movies and also because of the negativity fed to people by some influential personalities. These messages and negativity is slowly given out and without even knowing ,your notions about things changes and it can be deeply rooted that your morale conscience get blinded by hatred and violence.
However, A proper moral education and character development might prevent this behavior. Adding to that, proper breaks with a relaxing work and study environment can not only help the students and employees mental state but also affect the productivity to a certain extent. Also, putting an age limit on the movies with violence will help to overcome this issue.
To conclude, the behavioral pattern of people have been more violent these days but focusing on the reasons behind this and working on improving the them , this social issue can be resolved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13503649635 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60648319445 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0807631755 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307400065105 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11469217393 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885643714622 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187740097423 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755649204104 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.