All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Employees knows about their company way better than than any outsider could know.They know about various minute details about the company and also their colleages so I agree that if companies spend more time listening to their own employees then they might not need the outside consutants to suggest ways for efficient operation of the company.
Firstly, the employees would themself want for their company to flourish. And to add to that they also know the functioning of the company. There are hundreds of employee in a company that means hundreds of different ideas and perspectives to look upon .
Furthermore by taking the suggestions of the employees they feel the sense of responsibility to work with efficacy.for instance,reliance jio is one of the biggest company in telecommunication sector.The owner of the company believes that all the employees are the leaders and have an important share in the success of the company ,and each employee works as if he is working for his own company. Because of this the employees put their blood and sweat to every tas they do and the results are very clear.
But in contrast there are these professional consultants who understands the market in much better way.So we cannot deny the fact that hiring a professional consultant can be a smarter choice in same cases like where to invest or to understand the demand of the market.
By spending more time listening to their employees, the company can find a way to operate the company efficiently as well as help create a more liberal environment at workplace which in turn will also result in betterment of company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, then, well, for instance, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0221402214 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89462937474 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.804463085 60.3974514979 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.125 118.986275619 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 23.4991977007 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 5.21951772744 247% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398019344353 0.243740707755 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151280442721 0.0831039109588 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115062200055 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209420234218 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907022939678 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.