Students generally get into college at the age of 17. A nation's economy, status and many other factors can boost with the power of youth. Now what if there is no diversity among the subjects the students study. This nation will definitely go ahead but only in a specific direction. A nation having a flexible curriculum from the beginning will not only give the students an opportunity to grow in the area of their interest but also it will help them achieve greater heights because of a specified learning direction.
Firstly, lets consider a situation in which a student is allowed to take a curriculum of his/her interest. A student who is good at music is allowed to take a curriculum which is focused to enhance the students vocal skills. This student who is passionate towards music will study with much more interest in other subjects too. It will also increase the probability of the student becoming successful. Sachin Tendulkar made his debut for India at the age of 16. If the school had not been supportive who knows there might not have been a great player like Sachin
Furthermore, in different parts of a country there are different cultures. For example California is a state full of tech companies and startups and in contrast to that New York is a state having corporate companies which are into finance sector. So in New York including field trips to corporate companies helps students to see the real world and experience the reality. This means that a nation can have a different curriculum according to student and also according to the location of the school.
Despite this fact, up to a certain age each schools should have the same curriculum for a set of common subjects like english, Mathematics, history, etc. English and mathematics are basic subjects and everyone should have a good command over it. Both of these subjects are required in all the fields and are equally important. Also Students should know the history of the nation he/she is residing in.
To sum it up up to a certain age there should same curriculum for all the students with some minor tweaks but after that age has been passes students should be allowed to take courses of their choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ly get into college at the age of 17. A nations economy, status and many other factors ...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e his debut for India at the age of 16. If the school had not been supportive who ...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or example California is a state full of tech companies and startups and in contr...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...l the fields and are equally important. Also Students should know the history of the...
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Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: up
...on he/she is residing in. To sum it up up to a certain age there should same curr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80474934037 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5829908256 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501319261214 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.1977805736 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8421052632 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266370573481 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794447937384 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532338709486 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149528921892 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517610556349 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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