A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extant to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain the reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Although it is very important for a student to have a firm foundation and have a wide knowledge, it is also important not to force the child to study the subjects he doesn't have an inclination towards. So the common curriculum should be followed upto when the child is 15. After that he should be allowed to pic
and choose his subjects.
Schooling is the place where the student acquires a firm foundation. A place where he can acquire all the basic knowledge that is needed for each field. This base becomes very importent for the student as it is a framwork that would help the child become a responsible and a well informed adult. Let's take the case of a child who loves maths and physics but doesn't show any interest towards health sciences, if the school allowes him to study only those subjects that he feels an inclination towards, then the child would be loosing on the knowledge that would teach him how to look after and take care of his body. This would deprive him of a very critical part aspect that he should know, irrespective of wether he likes the child likes to learn it or not.
Thinking on the same lines we would immediatly be able to point out that the child, to make a well informed descision of which subjects to choose during his schooling, would require him to first know what those subjects actually are. How could somebody say if they like something or not without trying it? So the common curriculum would serve to allow them to taste a bit of all the varities that are available for the child, so that he takes a well informed descision of which course to choose once he is older.
All this being said, the time the child joines schooling till the time they enter college feels like a
lot of time. Though the child requires a firm hold on basics and a good variety to experience the diversity, the duration for which he should be following the same national curriculum should not be too long as this might be counter productive for the student. Coming to the same example as stated in before about the child not liking science and math over health sciences, if the child is asked to study Biology until his college years, he might loose interest the entire learning process making him score low due to lack of interest. This might in-turn affect his performance in the subjects that he likes as well. All this might affect the child negatively and demotivate him.
So to conclude although it is very important for a student to have a firm foundation and have a wide
knowledge, it is also important not to force the child to study the subjects he doesn't have an inclination towards. So the common curriculum should be followed upto when the child is 15. After that he should be allowed to pic and choose his subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 498.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56827309237 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38993365483 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421686746988 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.2557325672 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.736842105 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2105263158 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73684210526 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133139319882 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494668212022 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390731625305 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663652270924 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362244048794 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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