"A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college."

Essay topics:

"A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college."

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Average: 5.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 823, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...students will have a contemptous look on others in terms of level of education. T...
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Line 3, column 890, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...of education. This will not only create an hostile enviornment but also divide the...
^^
Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...present their marksheet. Unfortunately, the the syllabus taught in every board is diffe...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...present their marksheet. Unfortunately, the the syllabus taught in every board is diffe...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 932, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
...SE board students to not get admission? No and the solution is to have a same nati...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3057.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 623.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90690208668 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99599519102 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6322877074 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446227929374 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 947.7 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5989480152 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8787878788 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57575757576 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266240253843 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760409880872 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147954837478 0.0758088955206 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187336130378 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222923045885 0.0667264976115 334% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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