A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

The parameters to verify the economic prosperity and development of a nation might not reflect the underlying true picture of the students and youth, the two pillars of any nation's success. The students will be in future, on whom the responsibility to run the nation resides upon. And to ensure that they can carry the burden on their shoulders they should be prepared for it. Education is the means to an end to achieve national prosperity. For equal uplifting of all the students, a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Standardisation and uniformity is what ensures consistency and reliability. Take for instance, the rise of self driven vehicles which has only been possible as a result of standarised road network built upon uniform set of rules. It is only then that a self driven vehicle can operate due to it's understanding of all the permutations and combinations which can arise in a standardised and uniform environment. The same can be held true in the world of academics, all the students can only be graded upon on a national level if they go through a same curriculum, enabling them to know there stance in the education system.

To ensure a healthy competition and thereby likeliness of increased proficiency, same national curriculum is of due importance. It is likely in such scenario, that the methods of imparting education and training of human resource involved in the process can be done with optimum efficiency.

In case of underprivileged students or students not having equal access to resources across the nation, however, additional remedial efforts can be undertaken to provide them with an equal stage as with the students free from such constraints.

All of the students studying the same national curriculum can help avoid various adverse contingencies and disparities in education system, in time providing an equal opportunity and platform for all the students to excel. Hence it is rightly put forth by author that "A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college".

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...dents and youth, the two pillars of any nations success. The students will be in future...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y nations success. The students will be in future, on whom the responsibility to run the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...students free from such constraints. All of the students studying the same national cur...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...platform for all the students to excel. Hence it is rightly put forth by author that ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, for instance, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13105413105 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00305442677 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509971509972 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7251128905 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.642857143 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546249095543 0.243740707755 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203514846372 0.0831039109588 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.228090432052 0.0758088955206 301% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312880110918 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23194632824 0.0667264976115 348% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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