A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum untill they enter college.
A nation should have a national curriculum for the students till college, instead of school having different curriculum. Here I agree with the statement. As if all the students study the same curriculum in their school so there is overall development of the children at school level will be equal and will have all the basic fundamental knowledge of all the subject taught in the school.
First if a nation has a same national curriculum at school level then the student studying in the school will have basic knowledge of subject, will have some skills and a fair personality when the student enter the college. And if there are different curriculum in each state then the students will lack in some area when they enter the college. So, the nation should decide a curriculum which should be followed by every state and community and this curriculum should be decided by keeping in mind the basic development of students at school.
Secondly, If there is national curriculum than when the student enters the college at that time they have basic knowledge which should not be low than faculty knowledge or not very high so that faculty can not cope up. So, by basic knowledge the student has an advantage that they can easily go in the flow during the lectures while the faculty feels comfortable during lectures. But if the student lack in the basic knowledge than faculty has to teach all the fundamentals of subject then they can procced further which is disadvantage for other students.
At last, who will decide this national curriculum? is a question. This can be done by legislators or regulators of the administration which are well wishers of the society. And how the uniform national curriculum should be decided? is also a question. So, this can be decided by keeping in mind the core of the society on which it depends. And if inflexible nature of uniform national would preclude the inclusion of programs ,courses, and materials that are primaryly of regional or local significance. For example, In Califonia the student have to study the history of their forefathers at school. This will help them to know that how they are enjoning the citizenship now.
Finally we conclude that by having this national curriculum at school there will be overall development of the student which is benefitial to the society in near by future. So there should be national curriculum at some extent while there should be freedom given to the administration for some of the subject.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225663716814 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.134955752212 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0840707964602 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0420353982301 0.0497285424764 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0243362831858 0.0444667217837 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148230088496 0.12292977631 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0287610619469 0.0406280797675 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69601291882 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0110619469027 0.030933414821 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00221238938053 0.0016655270985 133% => OK
Determiners: 0.134955752212 0.0997080785238 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0486725663717 0.0249443105267 195% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0287610619469 0.0148568991511 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2486.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 422.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89099526066 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341232227488 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272511848341 0.280924506359 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189573459716 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118483412322 0.132149295362 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69601291882 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 219.290929204 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388625592417 0.48968727796 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.6125443468 55.4138127331 75% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1765584114 59.4972553346 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.674092028746 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 48.3511848341 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.64882698954 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372386874273 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128928026719 0.123202303941 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.132916296817 0.077325440228 172% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553630653965 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216206555155 0.149214159877 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151489762331 0.161403998019 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842311691488 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.486511498935 0.385218514788 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0962710010865 0.0692045440612 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268716525583 0.275328986314 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586770969234 0.0653680567796 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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