A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

Students are the future of any nation. Focusing on the adequate development of the children in their school life will give better engineers, doctors, scientists, etc. coming from our nation. That will later affect the state of development of our country. I agree with this proposal of the same national curriculum for all the students of our nation. It will give a fair platform to compete or judge the students across the nation, would ease quality control, and cut the barriers in communication among the students across the country.

First, by having the scheme of a single curriculum for all the students will give them a sense of belief that they also have the same syllabus, what everyone else is studying. They would not have any notion like students in developed cities or costly schools have advanced and more opportunistic curriculum. Also, they would not feel their syllabus is different from others in terms of difficulty or content, so there is no valid comparison applicable. This will put an end to all these considerations and will incur a sense of competition where all students would be ranked on a single platform.

Secondly, having a standard curriculum will help in easy management and quality administration. We can set up a central control board, which will look after the needs of schools across the country. Single Board of control will remove all the discrepancies and inefficiencies of the many regional boards present. It's hard to manage and keep up the quality education in a dispersed system. We can also have experts for various aspects of academic development who would head the academic department of our country.

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Average: 5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 274.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04744525547 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80835325307 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5161643551 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223879135181 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090143783815 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999032150969 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152592187856 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889773685314 0.0667264976115 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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