A nation should require all of its students to study under the same national curriculum.
The memorandum from the business manager of a television station states that the time dedicated to weather and local news should be raised to the previous level in order to get more viewers in the television program and also stop losing the revenues related to advertising. It presents the shortage of time for weather and local news generating most of the complaints from the viewers as an evidence, along with the nullification of the advertising contracts from the local businesses. However, before justifying this, it must answer the following three questions to evaluate its evidences.
First of all, the prompt has assumed that the variation in the time for the late night news program has resulted in the complaints from the viewers. As most of the complaints came from the viewers about the coverage of weather and local news, the time associated with these two might not be an issue. There could have been a discrepancy about the weather and local news shown on the television station. They could have told about clear weather and there occured a hurricane which led to public complaints. So the authenticity of the news delivered might have been a problem rather than the time dedicated to it.
Secondly, the prompt thinks that the cancelation of the advertising contracts occured due to the short time devoted to weather and local news. But this might not be the case. This cancelation might have occured as a result of lack of money. Probably the local businesses want to invest in something else rather than a television news program at late night. They could have found a better alternative to this mundane program and decided to shift from this path.
Furthermore, it is assumed that the viewers will be more attracted to the program if the time for local news and weather are increased. This might not hold true. The viewers might have different opinions about the program. Some people might like news programs, some might not. For instance, children like to see cartoons on televisions mostly instead of news program. Adults are addicted to football, baseball, basketball and other sports. So they might not like a news program due to their preferences. Therefore, the assumption might not be correct.
To conclude, the prompt is very much flawed and it has to clearly specify the underlying questions mentioned in the previous paragraphs and justify the statement it made by answering the questions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01485148515 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65870160899 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460396039604 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.8089244011 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0909090909 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0247000929383 0.243740707755 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00824632802921 0.0831039109588 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0154469929069 0.0758088955206 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0187994825133 0.150359130593 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155776297251 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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