Nature has designed men and women with their own unique characteristic. Since ancient time society has seen women as a symbol of love, concern, care and has perhaps, treated them as weak. Whereas on the other hand, men were treated as the embodiment of strength, power and supreme.
Nature has designed men and women with their own unique characteristic. Since ancient time society has seen women as a symbol of love, concern, care and has perhaps, treated them as weak. Whereas on the other hand, men were treated as the embodiment of strength, power and supreme.
In history, there are many incidents which clearly justify that there were different tasks assigned to men and women based on there physical differences. Women were supposed to have slim body and a definite physique that would make them attractive enough for men to woe them and be perfect marriage material, whereas men,were supposed to be stout- with heavy and muscular body. Hercules was a symbol of strength with heavy physique and symbolic of strength and power. It was decided by a society that women, due to their fragile and weak body, had the foremost duty of managing household works, taking care of children ,their husband and family. Due to their attractive physical appearance they were made feel uncomfortable to go out of their house and be immured within the walls of house. While on the other hand, men were assigned with the responsibilities of going in the war and fighting, and conquering the nations.
As the time passed , such notions ossified with time and women lost their status in the society and men gained supremacy and higher status, and the conditions were so bad that women where even disfranchised. Bur women like Queen Victoria under whose reign Britain ruled the entire world for over a decade proves that women were not only capable of managing househols but were also capable to rule the entire world. History has also proven that women once deprived of education can cecome great scholars in different fields. The society should not forget that it was because of three women in NASA, that they were able to attain their Apollo Mission successfully after witnessing many failures.The society have always governed women and men based on the notions. Even in sports that desire lot of physical strength such as boxing wrestling, women like Mary Kom have established an equal position as male.
Though one may argue that there is fight among same gender and not between opposite gender but it has been proved in history that Rani of Jhansi, the lady , who fought alone with the Britishers for and was successful unless a relative of her betrayed her by privoding her wring information of the British army. Thogh women like Florence Nightingale are examples that prove that women are the symbol of love, care and compassion but women alike Queen Victoria, Rani of Jhansi has also proved that fighting a war or Mary Kom that proves that sports related to strenth are not only for men burb women can also be at par with them. Similarly, me also pursue there in hoome science or hotel management, becoming a chef or even artists, the job that was once considered suitable for women only. There are incidents where a man manges the house and women goe outside for ob. But this transformation never makes anyone less than other and no job is less in status than other, what matter is how well you do the job and you do the job that you love to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2617.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 546.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79304029304 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42204022209 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509157509158 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 840.6 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6123416956 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.736842105 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7368421053 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477128285373 0.243740707755 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159148634648 0.0831039109588 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150132364108 0.0758088955206 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38741216432 0.150359130593 258% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.301029862731 0.0667264976115 451% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.