Surely many of us have heard this sentence at some point in our lives: "Think outside the box." Many more of us have heard this saying, or a variant of it: "The definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over again, and expecting a different result." With so many fields of study trying the same thing and not getting anywhere, it's easy to believe that the field of study is struggling because it has not tried to incorporate another field into its study.
Furthermore, numerous studies joining with other studies and becoming very successful makes it even more believable that in order to succeed, you must join with another study. With economics combining with math and becoming very popular, and astronomy partially combining with physics to be one of the most sought after majors in college, it seems that combining fields is the way to go. Besides, numerous other things besides fields have combined, and become extremely successful: many movie companies, including Marvel and Pixar, are combined with Disney, and have become two of the most well-known movie companies out there. T-Mobile and Sprint cellphone companies have recently merged, causing T-Mobile to be extremely competitive in the phone market. With all this happening, what's the point of staying alone?
These examples make it seem nearly impossible for a field of study to not join another field and gain knowledge. However, fields of studies that have not merged and are still going strong still exist. After all, math is one of the most well-known field of study of all time, and it has stayed alone forever. In fact, other fields of study have combined with math, not the other way around. So much math exists that has not been solved yet; new knowledge and experience is being gained everyday. The same applies to other fields of study, such as music and history. We will never run out of history to discover!
If these three fields can remain alone and gain knowledge and experience, any field can. If done the right way, fields of study can be even better alone than with another field of study. The challenge is to find the right field of study to provide the experience and knowledge necessary to succeed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 782, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... phone market. With all this happening, whats the point of staying alone? These ex...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...nowledge and experience is being gained everyday. The same applies to other fields of st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, after all, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92021276596 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44150095023 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505319148936 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.484749279 60.3974514979 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231775843158 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914669696626 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481752246867 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159019763588 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616097081744 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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