As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology is a very important aspect of today's world. As technology is invented for people to make their task easy, however it is observed that people tend to depend on these technologies wholly. By the use of technology one can complete the activities more efficiently in very less time. Thus, we can think of developing new ideas effectively in the remaining time. Now a days, technology has taken a wide place in our life that in the absence of technology humans find it very difficult to survive.
Our surrounding consists of various technologies such as mobiles, machinery, computers, and transportation etc. For a instance, computers are the best invention which is used in each and every type of the work. Mathematical calculations like multiplication, division, addition and more made easy by use of computers. We can visualize the drastic change in the development of the banking, networking, communication, machinery fields which involves the use of computers.
Although with the revolutionary technology's major comfort and easiness, drawbacks also arises.
Take for an example, internet is used to transfer different type of data with one another and connect the people all over the world. At the same time, one can misuse the data uploaded by the users. Hacking of the information such as passwords of email accounts, bank accounts etc. which might give rise to robbery. Also, automobile industry play a superb role in making our life easier but the resources are not available till the end of the world. Online education is one of the important development in the field of internet. One can enroll for any online course of their interest and continue to get knowledge by the usage of internet.
Thus, it can be concluded that technology is really a power to the human imaginations but it should definitely utilize proper and human should never consider everything granted,there should be new learning every day, every moment. If we will learn more, we can implement more, we can invent more, we should understand that human thinking is as important as the technology. We rely more on technology to solve our problem but we should also try to understand our inner power and real strength.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...deas effectively in the remaining time. Now a days, technology has taken a wide place in o...
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Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... effectively in the remaining time. Now a days, technology has taken a wide place in o...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... computers, and transportation etc. For a instance, computers are the best invent...
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Line 8, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...should never consider everything granted,there should be new learning every day, every...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09340659341 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94429115075 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543956043956 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4908423631 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234405637245 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604972567671 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610743391986 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114001556304 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802469936617 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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