As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Essay topics: As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

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i agree with the statement.

It can be proved even with a simpler example, now a days we use calculator for simple equation or math which is actually frustrating that we don't rely on our ability to solve or believe in ourselves.

doing critical calculations or saving large data in computer rather by solving or memorizing own makes people to forget many important things in their life about what they should do or shouldn't.

we are now heavily dependent on mobile for our daily routine activities instead on our instinct and conscience. we are so indulging in technology such as mobile, TV, laptop etc that we barely keep any time for our family. Relationships have become so feeble since the time people started utilizing this cursed technology instruments.

Man can't grasp their own life and lose control of their surroundings

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 58.6224719101 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 2235.4752809 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 140.0 442.535393258 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 4.55969084622 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75758693685 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 215.323595506 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.757142857143 0.4932671777 153% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 704.065955056 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8851783927 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115833927474 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445007040925 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341698432118 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465343582302 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413529205211 0.0667264976115 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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