The Current Scenario in all over world, Technology plays important role in all field. I Partially disagree with given arguments as the main focus tends us towards writers comment that ability of human to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. The coin has always two face, so in that concern this topic has both advantages and disadvantages.
In Education field if though students have some query related some topic, then just put to google chrome the website give you more information related to that with example. In pandamic situation its tough situation to attend the classes, so this problem resolve by the internet technology. Earlier people are used Telephones or Landline for calling. Its difficult to make call to different country, now a days there are various app which provide video conferance. All this technology made by Human Being, its not possible humans to think themselves surely deteriorate.
Considering pandamic situation, scientist find out solution with this updated technology. a years ago, due undevelpment in Technology or not understand the decease Doctors or scientist unable to saves the life. Now Updated technology, human can get symptoms and start treatment before situation get critical. in Automobile Technology plays important role as 10 -15 years ago for lifting weight there are labors who lift that weight from one place to another place but now by adding crane concept human effort reduced. This Improvements in technology is done by human.
I Partially agree with arguments, before introducing the advanced smart phone peoples use remember the cell number but now days technology may affect human mind set that they can't remember there relatives cell number in worst situation. Even though we more depends on Internet, if some one have there birthday we forget to wish him/her. The internet provide an remember of his/her birthday.
Previously, Childeren Unaware of Smart phones and its feature. They mostly spend there time on cricket ground playing cricket such games.but now days each everyone have there smartphone in hand just make online group and plays games just for hours. By introducing new features in smart phones childeren are some what lazy.
The Conclusion made from this that, this technology introduced by human being so its up to human mind that what extent to use.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...ly disagree with given arguments as the main focus tends us towards writers comment that a...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'face' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...ly deteriorate. The coin has always two face, so in that concern this topic has both...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...cult to make call to different country, now a days there are various app which provide vid...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... to make call to different country, now a days there are various app which provide vid...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'apps'?
Suggestion: apps
...t country, now a days there are various app which provide video conferance. All thi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o think themselves surely deteriorate. Considering pandamic situation, scientis...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
... solution with this updated technology. a years ago, due undevelpment in Technol...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
... solution with this updated technology. a years ago, due undevelpment in Technology or...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...echnology. a years ago, due undevelpment in Technology or not understand the dece...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...reatment before situation get critical. in Automobile Technology plays important r...
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Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...ing crane concept human effort reduced. This Improvements in technology is done by h...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...es use remember the cell number but now days technology may affect human mind set th...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ogy may affect human mind set that they cant remember there relatives cell number in...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
...nt remember there relatives cell number in worst situation. Even though we more depends ...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
... though we more depends on Internet, if some one have there birthday we forget to wish h...
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Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...we forget to wish him/her. The internet provide an remember of his/her birthday. Pre...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t to wish him/her. The internet provide an remember of his/her birthday. Previo...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t to wish him/her. The internet provide an remember of his/her birthday. Previously, Chi...
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Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et ground playing cricket such games.but now days each everyone have there smartp...
^^
Line 9, column 309, Rule ID: SOME_WHAT_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhat' (=slightly)?
Suggestion: somewhat
... features in smart phones childeren are some what lazy. The Conclusion made from this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25866666667 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63676030175 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2430239155 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.21951772744 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196852526192 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516202538502 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525246011495 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942161304665 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546435446162 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...ly disagree with given arguments as the main focus tends us towards writers comment that a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'face' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
...ly deteriorate. The coin has always two face, so in that concern this topic has both...
^^^^
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...cult to make call to different country, now a days there are various app which provide vid...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... to make call to different country, now a days there are various app which provide vid...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'apps'?
Suggestion: apps
...t country, now a days there are various app which provide video conferance. All thi...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o think themselves surely deteriorate. Considering pandamic situation, scientis...
^^^
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
... solution with this updated technology. a years ago, due undevelpment in Technol...
^
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
... solution with this updated technology. a years ago, due undevelpment in Technology or...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...echnology. a years ago, due undevelpment in Technology or not understand the dece...
^^
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...reatment before situation get critical. in Automobile Technology plays important r...
^^
Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...ing crane concept human effort reduced. This Improvements in technology is done by h...
^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...es use remember the cell number but now days technology may affect human mind set th...
^^^^
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ogy may affect human mind set that they cant remember there relatives cell number in...
^^^^
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
...nt remember there relatives cell number in worst situation. Even though we more depends ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
... though we more depends on Internet, if some one have there birthday we forget to wish h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...we forget to wish him/her. The internet provide an remember of his/her birthday. Pre...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t to wish him/her. The internet provide an remember of his/her birthday. Previo...
^^
Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t to wish him/her. The internet provide an remember of his/her birthday. Previously, Chi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et ground playing cricket such games.but now days each everyone have there smartp...
^^
Line 9, column 309, Rule ID: SOME_WHAT_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhat' (=slightly)?
Suggestion: somewhat
... features in smart phones childeren are some what lazy. The Conclusion made from this ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25866666667 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63676030175 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2430239155 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.21951772744 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196852526192 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516202538502 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525246011495 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942161304665 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546435446162 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.