Our behavior and attitude are almost nurtured by our surroundings. It the broadside analytical thinking we adopt from society as a whole. Every action has an equal and opposite reaction. When an incident happens at a place the reaction of an individual would be based on immediate surrounding environment whether positive or negative. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement that peoples attitude are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole with three reasons and has to go through scrupulous discussions.
Firstly, every person in this world develop an attitude based on inimical environment around. For instance, when a child is born he would not have any idea of manners or language what to speak and what not to. It is the parent that help them to grow in an matured human being. Not all will develop a attitude with high standards it again depends upon the education, standard and the moral values of the people they are living around. Thus, there is avital impact on the way one develops their mind due to surrounding hostility.
Secondly, the immediate things happening in our range either inspire us or make us sad. For instance, a few businessman have a group of inspiring friends who always try to aim for the best. When one takes an action towards greater good the others in the group would instantly get affected and inspired to follow the same path. Even in an elite scholar group when one tries to achieve higher degree for a better future and to gain more knowledge would impact the others to achieve more and the same happens vice versa with the negative effects. They would not be excited to strive for more because in a society there are scholars or rich businessman instead they would get influence by immediate things happening around.
In addition, we express our reaction based on the incidents we encounter with instead of thinking how a person in society would react ? Suppose that, an argument is going on in our surrounding and we would quickly show a reaction either to hinder or mitigate the effect on both sides. It the reaction we would pick up instantly based on things happening around. We would not consider filing an FIR in police station and then taking further actions just for a simple fight. Peoples attitude is tuned and developed based on situations that occur around.
To conclude, one would argue that attitude would be based on the society as a whole. There are no proper evidences nor the examples in amply cases that show cased the issue argument. The statement belies the actual instances taking place. One augment's the personality based on the environment he is raised and nurtured in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 253, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...is the parent that help them to grow in an matured human being. Not all will devel...
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Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tured human being. Not all will develop a attitude with high standards it again d...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun businessman seems to be countable; consider using: 'few businessmen'.
Suggestion: few businessmen
...pire us or make us sad. For instance, a few businessman have a group of inspiring friends who a...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the group would instantly get affected and inspired to follow the same path. Ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84598698482 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5722155427 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505422993492 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0757184108 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0833333333 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2083333333 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178547816228 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526067527807 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775097774977 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110190765025 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827519835081 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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