Education is an amalgam of different activities such as theoretical, practical and cultural Activities. It is from the basic that we get a strong foundation and would be able to explore a wide range of activities. Of course the infrastructural development is vital but along with those cultural and sports plays a prominent role. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with the statement of cutting funds for extracurricular activities for repairing buildings because of three reasons.
Firstly, Sports boost energy and self-confidence in children. It is essential for overall growth of a child in all mental aspects and also augments the immunity power. For instance, If gold medalists who are competing in Olympics not given a chance to explore there interests because of some lack of funds then they wouldn't have bought a recognition for the country. Involving in sports increases the chance of a individual to become a team player. Also, with out door activities there are chances of having more nutrition absorption and also helps in Hormonal balance. Obesity has also became natural among many school children because of only studying by sitting idle at a place. To mitigate the chances it's recommended to concentrate a prominent amount of fund on out door activities as well.
Secondly, School could urge for a loan or fund raising event instead of cutting the most essential part of child growth. With the fund raising activity it evolves responsibility towards their school in children and also surge awareness to parents and leaders at high level about deficit of funds. These days many volunteers are coming forward to provide best facilities for Educational institution's keeping in mind they are the future of our next generations.
Furthermore, Infrastructure is an essential basic requirement. For Instance, an accident happened in a rural area school which lead to decimation of many puerile souls. In this particular instance it would have been better if they had mainly concentrated on making the foundation and building better instead of focusing on other improvement works or competitions. we cannot bring back a soul which is lost but we can take enough measures before a disaster can happen. Even in many rustic areas girls are not provided with better sanitation facilities which led them to abandon school. Here the infrastructural development plays a crucial role in order to influence more people to get enrolled in school.
To conclude, both the views has its benefits and drawbacks but what ultimately needed is a strong pillar foundation in a child career. It would be better recommended to not cut these funds instead organize a fund raising event or fawn the influential people in the neighborhood to get the work done. These days government is providing amply funds to hinder these deficits. Once an application is submitted they are taking action within days which is a promising indication for a better society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...because of some lack of funds then they wouldnt have bought a recognition for the count...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lving in sports increases the chance of a individual to become a team player. Als...
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...dividual to become a team player. Also, with out door activities there are chances of ha...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...s in Hormonal balance. Obesity has also became natural among many school children beca...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...s many volunteers are coming forward to provide best facilities for Educational institutions...
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Suggestion: We
...ther improvement works or competitions. we cannot bring back a soul which is lost ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...eighborhood to get the work done. These days government is providing amply funds to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2467.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16108786611 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96478945981 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554393305439 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0999528701 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.791666667 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20833333333 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278633908679 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670547154664 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627259681787 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146687994492 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458666628682 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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